I just sent a better part of an hour going through the first 34 pages, rearranging stuff, rewriting stuff...I'm a little pissed at myself because I promised my self I would not do this until the 1st draft was done.
Anyway, back on writing new pages. Things are starting to stick together story wise and really holding now. Good creepy stuff....and I think I'm doing a good job of keeping the characters strong, unlike a lot of horror screenplays do. I want solid scares, but I want solid people....not stock disposable characters......so when things happen, the reader will actually care a little (?).
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